Tuesday, October 19, 2010

5 Paragraph Essay Practice


Abigail, The Best Dolphin There Ever Was!

When I grow up I think I'd make a great dolphin. I've always enjoyed swimming with the orcas. One of my favorite things to do is splashing water with my tail. I even have some experience at chasing my predators. I can jump really high, I'm good at swimming really fast, and I can beat up a shark, therefore, I will be the best dolphin that ever was!

Jumping really high has always come naturally to me. There was that time when I jumped really high. I always feel safe. Whenever I jump, I feel like I can see the whole world. Being able to jump is the first step along the path to become a dolphin.

Swimming really fast is another thing I really enjoy. It's so exciting to swim really fast. When I swim I feel like an angel in heaven. I am to swimming really fast, what spider man is to jumping buildings. Being able to swim really fast for the rest of my life would be awesome!

Beating up a shark takes a special talent. I gained a lot of experience by  living in the ocean. I learned a lot about the shark.  For example, I can gain speed by swimming really fast and attack them. The time I spent beating up sharks is sure to give me an advantage when it comes to becoming a dolphin.

The three most important ingredients required in order to become a successful dolphin are being able to jump really highbeing able to swim really fast, and beating up sharks, and I got them all! I want to be a dolphin forever. I'm never so happy as when I'm in the midst of a whole bunch of sharks. It's like Emily said, "You would be a great dolphin." When I'm a dolphin, I'm myself, and that's why I'll be the best dolphin there ever was!


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